Holy hell. I must say, it was good in the beginning, your usual standard, entertaining, engaging, but once you hit the paragraph about summer and sunlight the momentum just kept growing and growing until you hit the fourth to last paragraph...and...holy hell.
I can feel that weight, that heaviness in my chest, you should know. And wow on the first/second person decision. I'm normally against first person in fic, but you ROCKED this.
I know you had a hard time with this, but based solely off the writing, you can't tell. It's gorgeous. We are in Gellert's head and it's a sad, creepy place to be.
I can't pick out anything I liked best. I liked everything.
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on 2008-04-21 11:56 pm (UTC)I can feel that weight, that heaviness in my chest, you should know. And wow on the first/second person decision. I'm normally against first person in fic, but you ROCKED this.
I know you had a hard time with this, but based solely off the writing, you can't tell. It's gorgeous. We are in Gellert's head and it's a sad, creepy place to be.
I can't pick out anything I liked best. I liked everything.