Yet another one (Drabble #15)
Feb. 25th, 2008 11:54 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Yes, it's here! Also, my computer has a problem today.
Title: Silent Exultation
Pairing: Albus/Gellert
Prompt: "Rain, ruby, pearl" for aurora_knight.
Summary: A rainy summer day out of sight.
Notes: I hope like mad this doesn't come off as too melodramatic.
Disclaimer: The Harry Potter universe belongs to JKR. What am I to that but free entertainment?
The rain pelting down is the most exhilarating sensation Albus has ever experienced – but that may have something to do with his lips gliding along Gellert’s neck. The two of them have taken refuge behind a bush, also dripping wet, shielding them from view as they cling hotly to each other. The kiss that comes later is sloppy but wonderful, and when Albus pulls away, he feels the warmth of the other’s breath on his face, laboured little gasps passing between lips gleaming like polished ruby. And Gellert draws him closer.
They vanish together in a shroud of pearl-coloured mist.
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on 2008-02-26 11:55 am (UTC)I completely agree with what
when Albus pulls away, he feels the warmth of the other’s breath on his face, laboured little gasps passing between lips gleaming like polished ruby. And Gellert draws him closer.
I'm a sucker for subtly rhythmic prose, so I squealed embarrassingly when I read this.
Btw, I actually wanted to read it last night, and I know I was still awake at the time it says you posted it, but for some reason it didn't show up. But after what happened yesterday nothing really surprises me anymore. The internet hates me and I must learn to accept it! XD
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on 2008-02-26 05:55 pm (UTC)And like I told
Whee, I'm glad for that! I like having some kind of rhythm to writing.
Gah, computers strike again. Actually, it took a while after the recorded time before I even got to post this thing. Everything loaded slowly and was driving me insane! As if the computer had something against me posting this drabble. XD
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on 2008-02-26 06:16 pm (UTC)And the right-wing computer conspiracy continues!!!
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on 2008-02-26 08:16 pm (UTC)Not on my end so far... Injustice. XD
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on 2008-02-26 08:22 pm (UTC)Maybe...
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on 2008-02-26 09:33 pm (UTC)*confuzzled*
Did you reply directly to my e-mail?
Or were you referring to something else?
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