Wow. No really, wow. That was, in a word, breathtaking. I don't know what else to say. It was damn good for a "messed up, disjointed" thing! Give yourself a little more credit.

Anyway, now for the coherent comments. I loved the part about Gellert observing the falling dust. That part really gripped me. It was just so... sad. Poor Gellert. :(

You maintain his character so well. And the emotions, as always, are very realistic. What really bothers me in a lot of fics is when the author puts in too much fluff where it is inappropriate.

And, since I am repetitive, let me just say again that your writing style has such exquisite flow. Lovely fic! If I ever get around to putting together a rec list, this is going on it. ;)